Aaron TP-6

On wednesday I met with Abdullah. Our plan was to go over writing because he had an exam the following day. I told him to bring all of the previous writing assingments he could find to try and find patterns in his mistakes. I did notice he used a lot of great words/phrases in his papers, but made a few grammatical mistakes. I then gave him a prompt asked he to write a shorrt essay paragraph by paragraph fixing any mistakes as well as giving him better words to use. we then went over the proper use of transition words.  After we completed the short essay he gave me some previos writing assignments. I went sentence by sentence explaing grammatical mistakes and better arguments to make his papers better. This session went on a lot longer than other ones and he seemed to take a lot from it.